200年12月23日六級考試作文及參考范文

  2、產生這種現象的原因

  3、這種現象可能帶來的影響

  Now people in growing numbers are beginning to realize that they prefer enjoying western festivals, such as the coming X’mas. There is a general discussion today about this issue. Certainly, this is a delicious sign of diversity in the life.

  A lot of reasons are responsible for it. To begin with, the young men are exposed to the international minds or trends, and they are partly influenced. What’s more, the western views have been spread widely, naturally, and culturally. Moreover, nowadays people have their rights to have a taste of various cultures. In other words, they may celebrate festivals they like besides the conventional days, like the Spring Festival.

  Obviously, this does some effects in our life. For example, it will arouse anxiety among so-called protectors of tradition. They unnecessarily worries that the western days are to replace the Chinese convention. Personally speaking, the policy of “let it be” will do more good that harm in this field. However, it is necessary that effective actions should be taken to prevent the negative effects of both traditional and western days.

  點評

  該樣文盡管有些不夠妥帖的地方,但中心突出(段首是中心),層次分明(邏輯詞的應用),語言變化多(近意表達,副詞,短語,并列,被動等等),無重大語言錯誤。

  本次作文,如大多推測,原因現象類。寫法:“中心句+1、2、3”模式。即,把提綱變為因為,以中心句體現在每段第一句,后面是分支觀點,第一……;第二……;第三……。所以從構思上不用費力。另外,英語四六級是外語基礎考試,考查的重點是語言,所以思維是否很合理或獨特無關緊要。當考生能簡化其構思時,將更有利于他的文字操作。四六級,作為英語初級高考對簡單但嚴重錯誤也是十分看重的,這是是否及格的一個必備條件,當考生發現難以操控語言變化時,請一定保持簡單無誤的語言表達,簡單的構思方式,這樣可以力保及格。

  在用詞用句上,四六級作文,不是用難句或難詞拿高分的。文章講求變化,用詞用句的變化。而變化模式不一定要難。如近意表達的變化,主動句被動句的轉化,副詞的應用都是變化的形式。當然,從結構上講,邏輯詞的應用,如鏈接詞,都是英文思維和結構的體現。總之,這次作文沿襲了穩健成熟的出題風格,各學員如果有穩健的基礎和恰當的應試技能,就能取得不錯的成績。

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